Raped of essence, Gaya thinks:
life is an affliction!
homo sapien sedition,
greenhouse emission,
they ruin my flawless skin…
Take me back to Eden's wake,
time of the primordial soup
when all was new
and only felt was heaven's embrace
cradled by sun and moon's light
Skies filled with faraway stars once vivid
now blanketed by industry’s breath
the heavens polluted by technology
nothing is left undefiled
like a dog with fleas, I am sets unease
Overpopulating, they
consuming all in their wake
their parasitic resilience
unsusceptible to my defenses
all failed attempts to quash them
weaponizing my tears
my quaking body and seething pants
yet the malady unable to shake
beset, but corrected I stand
… man, not life is my only affliction
Worn, abused and tired am I
Awaiting what're be my end
by tormenters within
'else by heaven's kind hand
leading me back to Eden's wake
Inspired by the dVerse prompt: Metamorphosis of Sorts

Wonderful ♥️
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Thank you! 🙂
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A strong opener, and I like how you personify the earth and share her thoughts, which seem to take on a metamorphosis of their own, realizing that life is not the affliction, but man.
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Thank you Melissa! I’m hoping the message of metamorphosis was apparent 🙂
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Earth will actually manage quite well as soon as she manages to get rid of that invasive species of humanity… unless we transform ourselves.
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and that is the truth.
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it is insane what we do. Will she finish us off? Or will our creation decide we are the problem and exterminate us?
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My money is on fire and brimstone brov! Its coming from the heavenlies like my Bible tells me 😉
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I loved this poem! Great personification of Gaia!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Why thank you! 🙂
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A very compelling write! I think the earth will be better off without us.
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It IS a bitter pill of truth to swallow my dear. Our wahala plenty (pidgin for “we are too much trouble”)
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So we are…
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What a powerful poem! To think that we’re the problem, when we think we’re the solution….
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It’s our pride as humans my friend. It won’t let us see past our noses
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