From dripping sweat
to anger’s boiling blood
From breaking wind
to dust to dust returned,
Save combustion…
yet “burning” with passion
All embracing
All Elements are we
A lay man’s expression of what Yogis have preached all this time…
inspired by todays prompt over at dverse – Tuesday Poetics: The Four Elements
Festival King 
Your poem has great shape and form, and I love that all elements are embraced in it.
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O thank you Kim. I am so rusty in my writing and poetry so your comment means a lot. 🙂
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You’re welcome.
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Beautifully written!
Yvette M Calleiro :-)http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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I appreciate your stopping by! 🙂
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You stripped it all bare to display the elements, which we snatched at withour eyes, leaving space in-between for pondering…so very interesting as an art form and philosophy…well done..
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Thank you for stopping by! 🙂
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Those bare essentials, and I can feel a lot of fire here.
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I am glad you like it 🙂
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