OK, today on dVerse its all about food and poetry courtesy of Claudia so I’m reblogging this piece as a token of my expression … hope you like π
Bundle of complication, Passionate; Rich in flavor, I could swear you be Cancerian by your mystifying behavior.
You are many layers; one core, Peeling at you leaves me sore, Wanting you is torture but the treasure of your spice I cannot ignore.
Lady, wild and free, Let me tend to you in my garden without fee, Let me have you for my own and savor your gifts, I alone.
O Common and yet Rare ingredient in my course of life, I long to keep you and have you for my wife. So in tears I'll patiently strip away to your center; Knocking on the portal to your heart till you 'gree me enter. And though you may be complex and sting for a time, I know Lady Onion, someday you'll be mine...
Β©2011 Festivalking
Hahaha! π
Just had fun with this, but I guess you can tell by now thatβ¦
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Festival King 
A well developed metaphor and Image
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thank you π
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That image is awesome. Love the sensual metaphor used in this. I suppose cooking can be sexy if it’s shared with the one you love π
Lovely poem.
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o thank you! π …. Still haven’t forgiven you for making me so hungry! π π
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What a wonderful sculpture and equally wonderful poem. K
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thanks π
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I really loved your use of metaphor here. I equally enjoyed the way you have formatted this piece. An excellent piece of writing! I really liked it. The hunger!
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Glad you enjoyed it π
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Beautiful. Love the sensuality of your poem.
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O thank you π
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many layers; one core…this is some cool verse to go with a cool pic..
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Thanks Claudia! and thank you guys for giving my writing more meaning! π
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Lovely line up of words. Good selection for a reblog. You’ve just given me another view of onions. I’m going to check out more…
Welldone!
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lol! thanks Teeceecounsel π
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Nice…I do love onions in my dish ~
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lol! so do I π
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You are always welcome festivalking. Wettin dey happen for your side? π
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Pa le! norin mosh o! π … I just de like dede π … how far your side na?
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I balance well my dear. Me I dey like Delegiwa. Norin much too. I just say make I feel your flow small. You dey try die. Your lines dey too too trip me. I commot cap for you! π
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Ose joor my brother! you too you be thinker o! feeling your sturvz big time π
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Nicely done. We are all onions. Some elicit more tears than others.
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So sorry I didn’t see your comment before. Lots of them were thrown in the spam box!
I’m glad you liked the piece anyway.
Cheers!
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Nothing do you my sister, I just dey use yarns flex. Everybody get em swag. Na so Baba do am for us. You no go crash? Abi na jand you dey? Time don fly well well oh! Enjoy! π
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Soon! I appreciate your comments man π
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You are always welcome. Keep up the good work.
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Cool verse you have here. Great metaphor use! Seen your original posting. Thanks for visiting, a first visit from you. Appreciate it Festival!
Hank
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Thank you for stopping by also Hank π
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This is very creative. I’ll never look at onions the same way again. I love the sculpture also.
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Lol! Glad it had such an effect. Its amazing that picture! I actually found it after I had written and title this piece π
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Almost too tempting for words! But the words have it.
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lol! Tempting?! Well thanks π
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