Today on dVerse, Anna Montgomery is taking us through the art of contemporary poetry. When I wrote “Red” earlier on in the year I thought it was just out right weird, but after reading her article I understand this piece even more.
Happy reading and please meet up with Anna at http://dversepoets.com/2012/10/04/meeting-the-bar-postmodern-prose/ for an education on Contemporary Poetry
Cheers!
I’m not sure it makes sense anymore, how could it come to this?…. Maybe I should have seen it from the get go but all I saw was “Red”…
I fell in love with beauty I had never known. Vibrant, Sexy, Intelligent, Creative… A perfect gift of Cupid’s to me. She would be my gem and fortune, and she was. We gave into each other absolutely; the perfect couple… Everything was “Red”, but time is a wicked thing…. With it that vibrant color begins to wear and a faded texture I see.
Cupid’s gift gradually morphs into a fiendish curse. Aggression and anger is its gift to us. She, still my rare beauty, I look at her and the devil wears Prada comes to mind. My “Red” beautiful, powerful and yet vain flower.
Quarrels over the slightest matters ensue… Initially welcome, as passionate acts of reconciliation fuel “bittersweet” to a…
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Festival King 
ugh…time is a wicked enemy if we don’t use it wisely to build the relationship and deepen that first attraction..nicely penned and a way cool pic..
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Thanks 🙂
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First the photograph is crazy awesome. Second, time maybe wicked, but I’m sure the moments you spent with her were worth it. Third this is great poem. Thanks for sharing.
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lol! well would you like it any less if I told you it was pure fiction? 😀
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I love that you saw how this was more than you originally thought! Yay! Congratulations and thanks for sharing your work, beautiful one!
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Thanks Debbie and thank you most especially for being there from the beginning 🙂
Hugs!
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This is a fantastic little blog I can not believe that I didn’t find it already.
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well thanks for finding it at last 🙂
Cheers!
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