Perfect want vs. Perfect will

I, your face I have sought on every desire hitherto
But so hard it is to get what I make known!
Why do my desired “yes’s” from your lips come out “no”
Best I come with thanksgiving leaving my wants un-shown!

Aware your plans are best, this without question
The path you place before me leading to the promise land
Yet my heart breaks as you put aside my every intention
… the stubborn child unwavering in her demand.

I implore, “This is what I ask for! let this be what I get”
Assuredly I will stand challenges on the rise
The climax is failure and at your feet I falls in regret
You in your omniscience bear no surprise

Thank you Google 😉

Again and again, stupidly battling against Your will
Yet ever loving Father you softly speak, “Be still…”

OK, so a friend says to celebrate the fact that its my first sonnet so here goes 😉 …. YIPPEE!!!!!!!! 😀

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Author: festivalking

... A journey of a mind full of wonder and imagination, but stubborn when it comes to sharing!

23 thoughts on “Perfect want vs. Perfect will”

  4. “Why do my desired “yes’s” from your lips come out “no”
    Best I come with thanksgiving leaving my wants un-shown!”

    Best lines for me… so much weight with so little words… wonderful stuff.. your mind is definitely producing nice thoughts.. keep going… 🙂

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  7. woot…rock on….great job on the sonnet…i just did my first a few weeks back when we did them at dverse…and i know all about the stubborn child…ha…i am one in that regard…smiles..

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