Picture by Terry S. Amstutz. For more of his work please click on the picture
Claustrophobic fit I make for the door Craving the exit Missing a step or more
Groping in the dark Finally hitting the floor I think “this will leave a mark” My mind still focused on the door
Hands and knees introduced to the ground I make my way towards the light I look back on the adventure with a frown The Exit my only respite
Bright lights up ahead so off the floor and towards the door I jet My quick paces lacking caution thus back in the dirt I get ๐ฆ
Hi guys! Just made this sonnet up for the dVerse prompt : Poeticsโ photography by Terry S.ย Amstutz (I am so late ๐ )… Experiencing a bit of a dry spell but I should make good pretty soon ๐
smiles…i am glad you made it as well….that will leave a mark…ha…i got a few of those…but i def feel the desperation or angst to reach the door…sometimes hard to get to that exit and leave an adventure behind….
glad you made it! this has a haunting feel to it… now, get out of the dirt! ๐
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Thanks Miriam! Sorry about the silence, been scatter brained about the blog latel
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smiles…i am glad you made it as well….that will leave a mark…ha…i got a few of those…but i def feel the desperation or angst to reach the door…sometimes hard to get to that exit and leave an adventure behind….
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Oh no! Don’t get back in the dirt, get running and take a flight!
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oh i can feel the tension in this…the wish to make it to that door…ouch on being back in the dirt just when the exit is so close within reach..
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Hehe! that’s what I get for being so impatient for freedom ๐
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Pretty poetry! I love and admire your consistent creativity. Beautiful piece really!
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Awww, thanks TC! ๐
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Yet she craves to return..a dream? certainly mysterious. Impeccable style as usual, and clear..but puzzling! – something is happening..
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LOL! I totally feel like I just floated with this one but I’m glad it came out so ๐
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They always seem to…they always seem to…
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Your sonnet poems are a delightful taste.
You bring such creative inputs in your work. ๐
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Thanks Neo ๐ … Your last post was totally awesome by the way ๐
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Thank you.:)
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